tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6547600583262947403.post883679675664382407..comments2023-08-06T00:35:46.202-07:00Comments on Talianasaurus: Flash Fiction - Hells's WorkNataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06568293443100201235noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6547600583262947403.post-21283111992842648162010-05-13T19:48:12.394-07:002010-05-13T19:48:12.394-07:00(Reposting previous comment under my actual name. ...(Reposting previous comment under my actual name. Silly Google/Blogger.) <br /><br />I'm sheepishlierly correcting the title. Can't have incorrect grammar. At least not in titles... Thanks for pointing out the error, John. : )<br /><br />Also, thanks for all the comments. The story is no longer sad and lonely.Nataliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06568293443100201235noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6547600583262947403.post-25812686652220588932010-05-13T19:43:04.976-07:002010-05-13T19:43:04.976-07:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Nataliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04068894394749800389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6547600583262947403.post-48483781100609392332010-05-08T07:52:57.954-07:002010-05-08T07:52:57.954-07:00Today I sheepishly come back, having realized &quo...Today I sheepishly come back, having realized " Hells' " is not grammatically correct. If a name is singular, you use an apostrophe and an 's' even if the name already ends in an 's,' so it would be "Hells's Work." A loan apostrophe is only used on plural nouns, like if you were describing the work of several Hells. Was a bit tired when I wrote you last night. Somehow realized my error when I woke up today.<br /><br />Karl remains really cute, tired or rested, though.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6547600583262947403.post-15744127813333722322010-05-08T01:19:33.725-07:002010-05-08T01:19:33.725-07:00This detail: "They write hate messages on the...This detail: "They write hate messages on the inside of my throat" is brilliant. And the whole premise is great, and just awful-- you die if you fall asleep! Augh! At least they're working to a solution. ...Aren't they? Great sci fi.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6547600583262947403.post-77196378503170464372010-05-07T21:33:24.589-07:002010-05-07T21:33:24.589-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6547600583262947403.post-86897909678040257972010-05-07T19:47:30.893-07:002010-05-07T19:47:30.893-07:00I'm fairly certain that this is my office acce...I'm fairly certain that this is my office accept you've replaced calls with paper.<br /><br />Great story.Randilinhttp://betweentheclicks.podbean.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6547600583262947403.post-62354760825902197632010-05-07T18:04:12.858-07:002010-05-07T18:04:12.858-07:00Hell's Bells! It's what I imagine working ...Hell's Bells! It's what I imagine working in an office must be like! And I can't imagine never getting to sleep again! This is horror at its finest! Some great lines too..."They write hate messages on the inside of my throat." Love it!Karly Kirkpatrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05032213203101470326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6547600583262947403.post-9532293822288598012010-04-25T11:59:56.213-07:002010-04-25T11:59:56.213-07:00WHAT ARE THE PAPERS FOR?!??WHAT ARE THE PAPERS FOR?!??Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com